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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

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FADE IN:

EXT. ROAD - DAY

PETER listens to a song as he waits in his SMART car. We hear indistinctly Peter's singing: "365 to live by..."from his iPhone 8+.

Peter's WIFE gets in the car.

PETER

I 've mistaken today as

Wednesday.

WIFE

Monday was a holiday...

You haven't done the

monthly bank transfer

to me yet.

PETER

Oh...

Peter drives off.

MONTAGE OF PETER'S FIRST HALF OF MAY

A/ Peter appears in Courts.

B/ Peter resets two iPhones, one iPad Mini and one desktop computer.

C/ Peter learns to use open-source word processing software.

D/ Peter attends a Council meeting at HKUST.

E/ Peter focuses on writing an on-line domain name dispute resolution decision.

F/ In Beijing, Peter speaks in an Expert Group, sustains a cut at a hotel garden and eats a lot in social functions.

G/ Suffering from gastroenteritis, Peter frequents the toilets and has congee only for a couple of meals.

H/ Peter immerses himself in composing a song, performing with a guitar, producing and publishing a music-video.

I/ When he turns 65, Peter goes to the Senior Citizen Card Office in Wanchai, and to an optical shop in Mong Kok.

END MONTAGE

INT. CLUB HOUSE SWIMMING POOL - DAY

Peter swims freely.

PETER (V.O.)

As I'm still fit to do

something, I should

carry on. As to my IT

skills, I enjoy learning

them anytime. Work

at HKUST will take up

some of my time.

Pausing.

PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd)

More domain name work,

would come. My stomach

flu recovery provides some

clinical information for my

younger son. At 65, I'm

still creative.

INT. STUDY - DAY

Peter works on his computer.

PETER (V.O.)

Turning 65 is a new

experience. One has to

wait for one's turn.

FLASHBACK

INT. MTR STATION - DAY

Using an Octopus card at a gate, Peter is shocked to see the yellow light flashed. He steps back, checking his card.

PETER (V.O.)

It's the same Doremon

Octopus card that I've

been using. As I've

already checked in, I

pass through first.

Peter proceeds to enquire at a ticket counter, presenting his Octopus card to the STAFF, who checks it against a machine.

STAFF

As you've provided

your birthday information

the card knows when

you're entitled to the

concessionary rate.

Peter nods.

INT. LIFT LOBBY - DAY

Peter in casual wear waits.

FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK

INT. LIFT LOBBY - DAY

Peter (50s) holds the lift for an elegantly-dressed LADY (early 60s) and a GENTLEMAN (65) in suit.

PETER

Hi, what brings you two

here?

LADY

My husband has turned 65.

I bring him to the Senior

Citizen Card Office to apply

for a card.

END FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK

Peter sighs.

PETER (V.O.)

They're both gone. Now

it's my turn to come here.

INT. SENIOR CITIZEN CARD OFFICE - DAY

Peter gets his senior citizen card from the counter.

PETER (V.O.)

They produced my card

in less than an hour. All I

needed bring was just my

photo to scan. My I/D is

always with me. I filled in

a form with a take and

signed.

He pockets the card.

INT. OPTICAL SHOP - DAY

When Peter leaves, the shopkeeper thanks him again and again.

PETER (V.O.)

Starting from today, I've

decided to try the finer

things of life. My glasses

are part of me.

INT. SITTING ROOM - NIGHT

Peter's wife and his elder DAUGHTER present him with a small cake with one lighted long candle.

PETER (V.O.)

I used to not caring about

birthdays as they're fakes.

But today, I'm old by

whatever measure. I won't

have my second 65.

Peter takes a selfie.

WIFE

Make a wish! Make a wish!

PETER (V.O.)

I wish health!

RETURN TO PRESENT

Peter remembers something.

PETER (V.O.)

I wrote my diary last night...

Picking up his iPhone, Peter checks his Notes folder "64". We see against it: "366".

Peter opens a new folder "65" and moves his May 15, 2019 diary to it. We see:"1".

FADE OUT.

The End

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