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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

A Cut Above

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDY - 20:30


  4. PETER checks selfies he has taken today with his smartphone.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Until today, I've been quite indifferent towards my appearance.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But today, I start to recognize the impact of my appearance has on others and myself.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Looking good isn't confined to the young. An elderly like me can still be looking good.


  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): However, I need to sustain my self-care practices, leading to my overall well-being and confidence.


  12. Act 2


  13. FLASHBACK


  14. EXT. BEACH - MORNING (Last Week)


  15. Sunny. Having returned from bay waters, Peter feels his face and then grabs his smartphone. We follow Peter to see his image on screen via the rear-facing camera.


  16. PETER (V.O.): Oh, my hair is too long. I should have a haircut.


  17. INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - AFTERNOON


  18. Peter, wearing a jacket, sits beside the lady CHAIR. When the meeting ends, a MEMBER approaches Peter.


  19. MEMBER: Peter, your hair is too long. As the Vice-chair, you should cut your hair.


  20. PETER (V.O.): She was my former colleague in Govt...


  21. INT. BARBER SHOP - LATER


  22. As Peter takes the barber chair, the BARBER studies Peter's hair.


  23. BARBER: Too long. Let me give you a fresh look.


  24. Have trimmed and finished with Peter's hair, the Barber takes out a mirror to let Peter see the back side of his hair.


  25. PETER: No need.


  26. PETER (V.O.): I don't care how it looks. I just want to have a haircut.


  27. EXT. ST. STEPHEN'S BAY - 11:15 (Today)


  28. Sunny. Peter uses banana peels as sunblock. Entering bay waters, Peter is about to swim.


  29. PETER (V.O.): I wonder if my shorter hair will help me glide through the waters.


  30. INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - 14:15


  31. Appearing, Peter sees the lady Chair and greets her.


  32. CHAIR: Oh Peter, you've cut your hair...


  33. The Chair continues to observe Peter's shorter-hair look.


  34. CHAIR (Cont'd): You look refreshingly different!


  35. PETER (V.O.): OMG, I haven't considered how my change in appearance can affect others' perception of me for a long time.


  36. Wondering.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): At my age, can I still be good-looking?


  38. FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  39. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - AFTERNOON (Two days ago)


  40. Peter, his SON and son's FIANCEE are checking old photos in albums.


  41. FIANCEE: Uncle Peter, you looked quite handsome when you're young.


  42. Peter smiles.


  43. PETER (V.O.): A newfound appreciation of how I looked over 30 years ago.


  44. MONTAGE OF PETER'S MEMORIES ABOUT HIS LOOKS


  45. A. In front of a long mirror, Peter (15) has his eyes fixed on his reflection. He runs his fingers through his long hair to make a Beatles' look.

  46. B. Leaning closer to the mirror, Peter (16) examines his face, in particular his eyes and nose with a critical look.

  47. C. Lecture room, HKU, 1981. We see two female law STUDENTS observing Peter (27) from the side, and overhear: He looks particularly handsome from this angle...

  48. END MONTAGE & FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  49. Exhaling a deep breath.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Even if I was a cut above, all good looks fade.


  51. RETURN TO PRESENT


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. STUDY - CONTINUOUS


  54. PETER (V.O.): It's basically my choice to get a haircut.


  55. Thinking.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Without striving for something above the norm, I've somewhat transformed myself naturally.


  57. Instructing his assistant in Photo_CreateE, Peter types on screen: draw an impressionistic colourful drawing entitled "A Cut Above". Within seconds, a colourful image appears.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My journey of self-discovery via "A Cut Above" is an intriguing and memorable one.


  59. FADE OUT


  60. THE END













































































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