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Ame Caline (Soul Coaxing)

Writer's picture: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS
  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. BEDROOM - 04:30


  4. Sitting against the bed back, PETER taps on his mobile screen from time to time.


  5. PETER (V.O.): Something's happening to my family and my soul is speaking to me in a coaxing manner.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Hours ago, I find that decluttering digital rubbish is a good way for me to make adaptive changes.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): For today, I can afford to stay up late.


  10. Enters his WIFE.

  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me also have a feel how my wife can cope with sleeping about 4 hours during week days.


  12. Pausing.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We both treasure our time and make the most of it - in different ways.


  14. Act 2


  15. INT. STUDY - 09:05


  16. Reports from TV. Songs from mobile. Peter is lying on a sofa, restlessly.


  17. PETER (V.O.):I haven't slept enough and may not be alert. For safety sake, I won't drive and would only do something gentle.


  18. Peter then hears easy-listening music.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Ah, I've heard this sweet tune before; but I don't know its title.


  20. Peter gets up to check the information on the mobile screen. We see: Raymond Lefevre - Soul Coaxing (Ame Caline) (1968).


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): What exactly is the title of this soothing instrumental music?


  22. Peter surfs the web with another mobile.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Raymond Lefevre is a French conductor. Soul Coaxing is the English translation of the French title Ame Caline.


  24. After Peter's taping an icon, we hear the music of Ame Caline again.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The climax begins at the beginning. But the melody loses traction in the Chorus. Who's the composer?


  26. Peter researches again.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It was written in 1967 by a French Singer/Songwriter Micel Polnareff. I don't know about him.


  28. Having typed the music title and the author name on his mobile, Peter sees moving images.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, there's a black-and-white music video of his song.


  30. We see on screen the author's lip-syn performance: https://youtu.be/twLgO0PPSvg


  31. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He looks talented. His soprano Chorus takes the song to the next level.


  32. Recalling.


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In late 1967, I was a Form 2 student, not knowing a word of French and hadn't thought about writing any song yet.


  34. Reflecting.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Have I got inspiration to write one now?


  36. Pausing.


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): At least, I need to decorate my soul first.


  38. A TV banner says: Remains of troops killed in Kabul Attack arrive in US.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):I've learned earlier that some were on their first and last assignments.


  40. INT. LAW LIBRARY, HKU - 16:45


  41. Sitting in a chair, Peter reads a book Pleading Without Tears.


  42. Pausing.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Before my wife and I had our last daughter, we anticipated the kind of soulful burden we had to bear.


  44. Pausing.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I belong to the old school. I've reasonable doubts about her future well-being.


  46. Pausing.


  47. PETER (V.O.): Am I pleading without tears, literally? And to whom?

  48. Act 3


  49. EXT. ESTATE SWIMMING POOL - 20:20


  50. Peter's swimming butterfly style.


  51. PETER (V.O.): I feel my soul is being attacked. I'm trying to escape, even from myself.


  52. INT. STUDY - NIGHT


  53. PETER (V.O.): Everyone has his/her own soulful burden to bear.


  54. We hear Andy Williams singing: Don't get used to losing you.


  55. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Have I come to terms with what's happenings?


  56. Peter listens to Ame Caline (Soul Coaxing) again.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): No, I won't let it be. I'll respond to the risk.


  58. Pausing.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): My soul is speaking to me in a coaxing manner to help her turnaround.


  60. FADE OUT.


  61. THE END


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