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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

An Eventful Monday

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. FERRY PIER#6, CENTRAL - 10:10


  4. PETER appears.


  5. PETER (V.O.): This summer, I've been to bays at Island South. But I haven't been to any outlying islands yet.


  6. We see the next ferry to Mui Wo departing at 10:30.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Today is hot. There're good amenities in Silvermine Bay.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (To phone): I give every day a fair chance to become an eventful day of my life.


  10. Act 2


  11. INT. WAITING AREA - 10:15


  12. At a harbour-view seat, Peter checks a WhatsApp message on his smart phone.


  13. PETER (V.O.): Oh, my younger son has got a 2024 internship offer in Australia!


  14. Pausing.


  15. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Great! He can focus on his final year studies...


  16. Peter types on screen: Great news!


  17. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Finishing the one-year internship, he'll become a licensed medical doctor in Australia.


  18. Recalling.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When he was in Form 3, he did brilliantly in History. I had no doubt that he'd excel in Arts.


  20. Pausing.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But he chose to study Science - the only one in the Cheung family to make such a choice.


  22. Pausing.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was quite worried if he'd do well in Science.


  24. Recalling.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He did face setbacks when he wasn't admitted to medical schools in Hong Kong.


  26. We see PASSENGERS embarking except Peter.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now, everything has become rosy...


  28. Turning his head, Peter sees SAILORS staring at him.

  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, they wonder if I'm to embark or not.


  30. EXT. SILVERMINE BAY - 11:45


  31. Promenade. Peter walks past three WOMEN who are chatting.


  32. WOMEN: What a scenic bay! It'd be nice to swim there.


  33. PETER (V.O.): Yes, just seeing it isn't fair. I'm taking action.


  34. Later, we see Peter swimming from one end of the swimming area to another.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm privileged, as there're two lifeguards caring about my safety - the lone swimmer here.


  36. INT. PUBLIC BATH - 12:30


  37. Having bathed, Peter hears phone ringing: Mum.


  38. PETER (V.O.): She must be feeling very bored...


  39. Peter answers the call.


  40. MUM (from phone):...your Dad has gone for over 10 years...


  41. PETER (V.O.): Yes, I miss my caring Dad who didn't care about money.


  42. PETER: ...I'll have lunch with you tomorrow...


  43. MONTAGE OF PETER'S SUBSEQUENT ACTIVITIES


  44. A. Promenade. Continuous. Sitting in a bench under a shade, Peter is still responding to her Mum's remarks over the phone.


  45. B. Pier side restaurant. Later. While having Fried Rice Noodles with Sliced Beef and a can of 7Up, Peter checks a WhatsApp message and looks pleased.


  46. C. Pier side McCafe. Later. While having McFlurry, a MAN sitting opposite to Peter chats with him endlessly and shows him the name card of a barrister.


  47. D. Mui Wo Pier. 14:10. Peter is the last passenger to get on board.


  48. END MONTAGE


  49. Act 3


  50. EXT. FERRY - 14:30


  51. Tapping an AI drawing App in his smartphone, Peter inputs "a man swimming in the sea".


  52. PETER (V.O.): While having a celebration lunch, I've also learned my elder son has become a legal practitioner in GBA, in addition to California and UK.


  53. Soon, we see a bluish cubist image appearing on the phone screen.


  54. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The man was so proud that he had a barrister friend, who was my PCLL classmate; but we haven't met since.


  55. After downloading the image, Peter is in thoughts.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Action may not always bring outcome, but there's no outcome without action.


  57. EXT. FERRY PIER#6, CENTRAL - 14:50


  58. Peter is the last passenger to disembark.


  59. PETER (V.O.): What an eventful Monday!


  60. FADE OUT


  61. THE END


























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