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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

An Old Man and a Smartphone

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. FERRY TO MUI WO - 11:00


  4. Sitting in a corner, PETER is glued to a smartphone.


  5. PETER (V.O.): A stock columnist compares the rare occurrence of a whale with a bull market in Hong Kong.


  6. Reading.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Given the opportunity, we must do the right thing at the right time.


  8. We see Peter making some "Sell" orders in an App in his smartphone.

  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The demise of the whale reminds me of Hemingway's novel "The Old Man and The Sea" - the "hero" killed the big fish in the end.


  10. We see raindrops falling on closed windows.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I do get the symbolism that in life and career, all have to persevere and resolve challenges.


  12. Later, following other PASSENGERS, Peter is the last one to disembark.

  13. Act 2


  14. EXT. PROMENADE, SILVERMINE BAY - 11:45


  15. Raining. Peter walks past a young ANGLER.


  16. PETER (V.O.): Fishing involves causing stress, pain and even death to fish, I don't do it.


  17. Standing under a cover, Peter checks charts in the Yahoo!Finance App in his smartphone.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Oh, the Heng Seng index has gone up before it goes down.


  19. Wondering.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): One of my orders should have been filled.


  21. Peter checks a stock trading App.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Yes, I haven't had such trading since April. I often buy high.


  23. EXT. SILVERMINE BAY - 12:00


  24. Changing room. Having changed to his swimming gear, Peter checks his smartphone.


  25. PETER (V.O.): Oh, there's new incoming mail checking my availability for a conference with a client.


  26. Having checked his smartphone calendar, Peter types his reply.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Now, the other side can fix it while I go swimming.


  28. Later, we see Peter - the lone swimmer - swimming in the swimming area.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): An old man and the sea.


  30. INT. CHA CHAAN TENG - 13:00


  31. When a plate of fried noodles is put on the table, Peter captures a photo of it with his smartphone and sends it via WhatsApp


  32. PETER (V.O.): I like to stay connected with my wife.


  33. Finishing his lunch later, Peter goes to the CASHIER who is glued to his smartphone.


  34. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Can he hear my steps or sense my presence?


  35. Peter waits.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Even if he can't hear or see me, doesn't he have the sense of unease that I'm standing in front of him?


  37. PETER: My bill please...


  38. We see the cashier detaching from his smartphone reluctantly.


  39. EXT. MUI WO BUS TERMINAL - 14:00


  40. Peter is about to board a route "3M" bus to Mui Wo.


  41. PETER (V.O.): Without an App's direction, I won't be taking this double-decker to Tung Chung at all.


  42. INT. GATEWAY OUTLET, TUNG CHUNG - 15:00


  43. Peter walks past a store selling clocks and watches.


  44. PETER (V.O.): I depend on accurate smartphone clocks, and I don't wear my watches.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Hmm, as I don't have any engagement next week, I'd plan a trip somewhere.


  47. Smartphone ringing. Peter takes the call.


  48. SECRETARY (from phone): Mr Cheung, you've a new assignment next week...


  49. PETER (V.O.): I now prefer to be disconnected.


  50. Act 3


  51. EXT. MTR FROM TUNG CHUNG - 16:00


  52. Tapping an AI drawing App in his smartphone, Peter inputs the prompt: An old man and a smartphone.


  53. PETER (V.O.): Technology and career are very different from the days when I was born.


  54. As a cubist image appears on screen, Peter looks captivated.


  55. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): A smartphone represents access to resources and information that weren't previously available to older generations.


  56. Peter takes a look of his smartphone.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I stay connected with my loved ones and the world at large, anytime, anywhere, even as an old man.


  58. Peter checks a Cheung Family chat group in his smartphone.


  59. FADE OUT


  60. THE END

































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