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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

Beneath the Surface

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. DEEP WATER BAY - 16:30


  4. Bus stop. PEOPLE waiting. Noise of passing cars. Sitting on a bench, a reflective PETER is having screen time.


  5. PETER (V.O): Embracing wisdom is the takeaway of the day.


  6. FLASHBACK


  7. EXT. STREET - 10:00


  8. Approaching a CRAFTWOMAN in a corner, Peter shows her a pair of shoes which look alright.


  9. PETER: I want to have their outsoles replaced. How much would that cost?


  10. The craftswoman examines the bottom parts of the shoes.


  11. CRAFTSWOMAN: For genuine parts, $800...


  12. PETER (V.O.): It's more expensive than a new pair...


  13. Act 2


  14. INT. RESTAURANT, WAN CHAI - 13:00

  15. Two round tables of CHAMBERMATES. Peter chats with the HEAD.


  16. PETER: Thank you for arranging the lunch party.


  17. HEAD: It's good to get together around X'mas.


  18. CHAMBERMATES#1 and #2 join them.


  19. CHAMBERMATE#1 and #2: We just come to say hello...we've to return to court soon.


  20. HEAD: Order and have something...


  21. CHAMBERMATE#1 and #2: Whenever we've court appearances, we don't have lunch...


  22. PETER (murmuring): So stressful for the young too...


  23. HEAD (to Peter discreetly): Lawyering won't contribute to longevity.


  24. PETER: I'm turning 70. I now treat myself as dead already so that I'd treasure every living moment more.


  25. The Head looks perplexed as plates of food are put on the table.


  26. PETER (Cont'd): Fortunately, my sons are doing well, and my wife is retiring soon.

  27. HEAD: Travel around the world with your wife then.


  28. PETER: Well, I believe I've done all that on my bucket list. I've no regret.


  29. Overhearing Peter's remarks, CHAMBERMATE#3 (70s) intervenes.


  30. CHAMBERMATE#3: But have you thanked all those who have made an impact in your life?


  31. PETER (enlightened): Oh, my slant is primarily self-regarding ...Your other-regarding way is wise!


  32. As chambermate#3 smiles, Peter picks up a piece of roast goose for the Head.


  33. PETER (to Head): This is to thank you for allowing me to join your set of chambers six years ago.


  34. Peter picks up another piece of roast goose for CHAMBERMATE#4 (70s) who sits not close to Peter.


  35. PETER (to Chambermate#4): Allow me to thank you again for facilitating my joining chambers, or I may not have any private practice experience.


  36. Peter then picks up another piece of roast goose for Chambermate#3.


  37. PETER (to Chambermate#3): I've to thank you for identifying my blind spot in really living a life with no regrets!


  38. EXT. DEEP WATER BAY - 15:45


  39. Wearing his swimming brief and a pair of goggles, Peter swims to the outer limit of the swimming area.


  40. PETER (V.O.): My near-sighted goggles enable me to see what is beneath the surface.


  41. Swimming.


  42. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I want to avoid any contact with fish or humans.


  43. We follow Peter to see what is beneath the surface.


  44. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): Actually, I don't know how deep is this bay.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): My relatives in LA have warned me about the danger of swimming in deep waters.


  47. Emerging on the surface.


  48. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): I know I put my life at risk every time I swim in the sea.


  49. Peter takes a look of the faraway shore.


  50. PETER (V.O.)(Cont'd): It happens when it happens.


  51. RETURN TO PRESENT


  52. Act 3


  53. EXT. DEEP WATER BAY - CONTINUOUS


  54. Peter prompts an AI bot in his smartphone to generate a drawing entitled "Beneath the Surface".


  55. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): In stories, there're often complex and hidden aspects.


  56. As an image of a pretty girl appears, Peter presses "Resend".


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Looking beneath the surface, I won't let a thing's intrinsic quality escape me.


  58. Repeating.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Thanking others is a powerful way to show appreciation and strengthen relationships, enabling me to live a regret-free life.


  60. FADE OUT


  61. THE END























































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