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Beyond Blurriness

Writer's picture: Peter K F Cheung SBSPeter K F Cheung SBS

FADE IN

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  2. Act 1

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  4. INT. BEDROOM - 06:00

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  6. Soft light of dawn filtering through the curtains. PETER brinks and then glances at the clock.


  7. PETER (V.O): Today, I've a 8:30 appointment in an eye clinic.


  8. Peter sits up.


  9. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Although it's only 5.00am in Japan, I shouldn't try to sleep again as I don't want to miss the long-awaited appointment.


  10. Placing his feet on the floor, Peter stands up.


  11. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I want to improve my vision as I often drive long hours at high speed in Japan.


  12. Stretching his back, Peter goes to the bathroom.


  13. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): In my January trip, my wife and I took turns driving for a total of 12 hours to meet up with our younger daughter.


  14. Peter checks and brushes his teeth.


  15. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): My teeth should be perfect in the afternoon.


  16. Act 2

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  18. EXT. EYE CLINIC - 08:30

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  20. Crowded registration counter. Peter stands in a queue.


  21. PETER (V.O): I'm quite young here.


  22. A MAN ahead of Peter talks to a RECEPTIONIST.


  23. MAN: I'm a retired civil servant.


  24. PETER (V.O): Me too. We're entitled to free medical service.


  25. As the line inches forward, Peter straightens his posture and passes the appointment slip to the receptionist.


  26. PETER: I'm a retired civil servant.


  27. Consultation room. An OPHTHALMOLOGIST is examining Peter's eyes with an ophthalmoscope.


  28. OPHALMOLOGIST: You've done you cataract operations, right?


  29. PETER (V.O): Are my eyes that good?


  30. PETER: No, doctor. I'm a first timer to an eye clinic...About a year ago, an optometrist in a optical shop opined that I had cataract in my right eye.


  31. Having re-examined Peter's eyes, the ophthalmologist asks a NURSE to administer certain eye-drops in Peter's eyes.


  32. NURSE: Your vision will be blurred for six-eight hours. Please sit outside until you're called again.


  33. Waiting room. As he waits, Peter grabs his smartphone to check Yahoo!Finance.


  34. PETER (V.O): It seems that the price of a stock that I've never sold has gone up by 10%...but I'm not certain...


  35. Placing a sell order nonetheless, Peter looks around.


  36. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): All I can see is blurriness.


  37. When called later, Peter re-enters the consultation room and have his dilated pupils examined.


  38. OPHALMOLOGIST: I'll arrange a cataract operation for your right eye...the waiting time could be three years.


  39. PETER: Understood.


  40. PETER (V.O): The current consultaion was initially scheduled in Dec 2025...


  41. MONTAGE OF PETER'S ACTIVITIES IN A STATE OF BLURRINESS


  42. A. Park#1 -11:00. Sitting in a bench with three smartphones, Peter is learning Korean, French and Spanish.


  43. B. Restaurant - 12:30. Peter is enjoying Baked Braised Pork Belly with Preserved Mustard Greens Rice and a cup of Horlick.


  44. C. Dental Clinic - 14:10. A DENTIST fills Peter's tooth cavity; Peter is all smiles when he leaves.


  45. D. PARK #2 - 15:00. Via a smartphone app, Peter sells another batch of a stock.


  46. END MONTAGE


  47. EXT/INT. PUBLIC SWIMMING POOL - 15:15


  48. Peter walks towards the entrance.


  49. PETER (V.O): For the past week or so, I haven't swum; but my wife and I went to many onsens...


  50. Pausing.


  51. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): In Akita's Nyuto Onsen, my wife had the courage to try the mixed onsen ie for both men and women.


  52. Peter changes in the changing room.


  53. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): We undressed together; but when we went to the hotspring, I couldn't cover my wife that much...


  54. Peter goes to the pool.


  55. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I just hoped the hot-spring steams could blur others' vision of my wife somewhat...


  56. Act 3

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  58. INT. BEDROOM - 21:45

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  60. Peter inserts an AI drawing entitled: "Beyond Blurriness..." to a draft in his laptop.

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  62. PETER (V.O): One must look beyond the blur to find the beauty that awaits.


  63. Thinking.

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  65. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Clarity comes not from seeking perfection, but from embracing the imperfections of life.


  66. Reflecting.

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  68. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): Meanwhile, for some health and financial arrangements, I'm moving from a state of uncertainty to a state of clarity.


  69. FADE OUT

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  71. THE END



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