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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

Beyond the Surface



FADE IN

  1.  

  2. Act 1 

  3.  

  4. INT. LIVING ROOM - 10:30

  5.  

  6. Cosy, filled with little things. Sitting on a sofa with his smartphone, PETER focues on Duolingo and repeats phrases in Spanish.

  7.  

  8. PETER: Como estas?...Donde esta la biblioteca?


  9. Recalling.

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  11. PETER (V.O): After his stroke, Alfred can't speak properly anymore.

  12.  

  13. Pausing.

  14.  

  15. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd):  But every time I visit him, he tries to speak in English. It's like watching a flower bloom in slow motion.


  16. Sighing, Peter returns to his daily lessons in seven languages.


  17. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): One of my daily objectives is to maintain my Duolingo streaks. So far so good for the past 240 days.


  18. Act 2  

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  20. INT. TUNG WAH HOSPITAL - 12:20

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  22. Ward. A frail ALFRED sits up in bed; his WIFE serves him food. They see Peter appearing with cups of fruit in his hand.


  23. PETER: Hi there! Here I come!


  24. Alfred extends his left hand and Peter holds it warmly.


  25. ALFRED: ...When...un...available...

  26.  

  27. PETER: When...un...available?


  28. ALFRED'S WIFE: He's asking you when will you travel in January?


  29. PETER: In about a week's time...my wife and I need to give some mental support to our younger daughter in Japan...


  30. A NURSE enters, noticing in particular a cup of scarlet-coloured dragon fruit.


  31. NURSE: Ah, that's why he had bright-red stool....


  32. PETER: Oh, that's confusing. I'll only bring white dragon fruit next time.

  33.  

  34. As Alfred's SON appears, Peter exits.


  35. PETER (Cont'd): See you tomorrow!


  36. EXT. KWUN TONG PUBLIC SWIMMING POOL 14:20


  37. Arriving, Peter sees a blocked entrance.

  38.  

  39. PETER (V.O.): I come here because the Sun Yat Sen pool is closed for cleansing.


  40. Investigating, Peter sees a sign: Closed for maintainance until 21 Feb 2025.


  41. EXT. SILVERSTRAND BEACH - 16:30

  42.  

  43. Waves crushing against the shore. Peter, in a wetsuit and with a cyber-green float, hears an annoucement: Lifeguard services will end in 30 minutes.


  44. PETER (V.O): That's good enough for my swimming in cold water.


  45. Peter plunges into the water.

  46.  

  47. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): The cold is enveloping me. I've to fight against it.


  48. Peter swims towards the outer limit of the swimming area,


  49. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I wear a wetsuit to extend survival time should anything happen to me. With a cyber-green float, my whereabouts, even beyond the surface, can be located.


  50. Later, Peter is in the changing room.


  51. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): I feel very cold...I may shiver and get mentally confused.


  52. Peter dresses quickly, putting his hands in the pockets.


  53. INT. DINING ROOM - 20:30

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  55. Over dinner, Peter's WIFE dreamily chats with Peter.


  56. WIFE: What if I win tonight's Mark Six jackpot...


  57. Peter chuckles.

  58.  

  59. WIFE (Cont'd): But think about it! All that money!

  60.  

  61. PETER: Yeah, why do we always end up buying those wrong numbers?

  62.  

  63. Sensing Peter's mood, her excitment dims.


  64. WIFE: It's just luck.


  65. Peter stares at his plate, lost in thought.


  66. PETER (V.O): I just want to be healthy and live a good life.


  67. MONTAGE OF IMAGES OF SHARON, AH CHUNG, AH SHE, DEBBIE, AH SHUI, TONY & SAM.


  68. Act 3

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  70. INT. STUDY - 24:00

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  72. Peter inserts an AI drawing entitled: "Beyond the Surface..." to a draft in his laptop.

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  74. PETER (V.O): What I perceive is often a fraction of reality and my routines significantly influence my personal growth.


  75. Thinking,

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  77. PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): In the face of adversity, it's essential to accept and adapt to life's changes. I make the most of everything that comes my way.


  78. Reflecting.

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  80.  PETER (V.O) (Cont'd): True happiness often stems from simple pleasures and good health, rather than material wealth.

  81.  

  82. FADE OUT

  83.  

  84. THE END







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