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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

CarCare Express

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDIO - 14:00


  4. Smartphone ringing, PETER takes the call.


  5. CALLER (from phone): Mr Cheung, this is "Fat Boy".


  6. PETER: Yes...How's my red coupe?


  7. FAT BOY (from phone): The good news is that the refixed air-conditioning system is working well but the bad news is that we found the battery dead.


  8. PETER: Is that right?


  9. FAT BOY: We thought the battery was Okay too. But when we test-drove your coupe hours ago, it suddenly went dead under the rain...


  10. PETER: Oh dear...


  11. FAT BOY: There was an emergency... it was all fixed now...but you've to pay more for the repair...


  12. PETER: Okay!


  13. Act 2


  14. INT. CAR REPAIRER - 14:30


  15. The Fat Boy is showing Peter the replaced parts in a corner.


  16. FAT BOY: The malfunctioned compressor, the old condenser and the thermal expansion valve...


  17. PETER: I see.


  18. FAT BOY: It was fortunate that we managed to find the only available compressor in town. Your coupe is too old.


  19. Peter's nodding.


  20. FAT BOY (Cont'd): Still, we've to make some adaptions to the connected parts...Fortunately, they work...


  21. Fat Boy then goes to Peter's red coupe to show him the new battery as a TECNICIAN looks on.


  22. PETER (V.O.): It would be very embarrassing for me if the battery went dead while I was driving the coupe under the rain...


  23. Getting inside the coupe together, Fat Boy starts up the coupe and then the air conditioning.


  24. FAT BOY: It's very cool now.


  25. PETER: Yes.


  26. PETER (V.O.): It's like what I felt when I first turned it on in 1989.


  27. Having settled the bill, Peter thanks Fat Boy and the Technician before driving away his red coupe happily.


  28. MONTAGE OF PETER'S CAR-REPAIRING EXPERIENCE


  29. A. Yuen Long, 1976 -1980. Peter (22-26) brings a Ford Capri to a car-repairing facility.


  30. B. Later. Peter searches for and engages multiple car parts providers.


  31. C. Later. Peter takes some spare parts to the car-repairing facility.


  32. END MONTAGE


  33. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Apart from not getting good discounts, I wasted a lot of time doing that.


  34. Recalling.


  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Then, I began to buy brand new cars, wanting to save the car-repairing troubles.


  36. Pausing


  37. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): After the initial trouble-free years, I had to bring them to the respective brands' authorized car-repairing facilities again.


  38. Driving.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'd to make prior appointments in locations not that convenient to me.


  40. Pausing.


  41. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): They provided one-stop service, but the examination fees and repair costs were often the highest I could get.


  42. Driving.


  43. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The last time I frequented the authorized car-repairers was a few years ago.


  44. Pausing.


  45. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When the genuine parts were out of stock, there wasn't much they could do.


  46. Driving.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The car-repairer I've been using provides one-stop service. They'd endeaour to source substitute spare parts for my old cars.


  48. Pausing.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The bill isn't cheaper than those authorised repairers as I'm often persuaded to replace parts that are still functional.


  50. Act 3


  51. INT. STUDIO - 18:00


  52. Having input the prompt: "CarCare Express" in an AI art generator, Peter sees a cubist image appearing.


  53. PETER (V.O.): My car-care need is such that I find one-stop service convenient, effective and efficient.


  54. Pausing.


  55. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Frequenting a micro-sized enterprise, my old cars and me get personalized attention.


  56. Pausing.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's also my small way to help maintain jobs for skilled technicians and non-electric car repair facilities.


  58. Peter smiles.


  59. FADE OUT


  60. THE END



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