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  • Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

Freshen Up

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDIO - 16:00


  4. Glued to his smartphone, PETER is contributing to Google Maps.


  5. PETER (V.O.): At the Hotel's Xiang Gong restaurant, a waiter was curious as to why I took lots of photos of the menu and food.


  6. Inserting photos to a draft on screen.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I explained to him that I wrote reviews on Google Maps; and I showed him my contributions.


  8. Editing the draft.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He thought it was great that my contributions had about 790,000 views. I remarked that it was actually 79 million.


  10. Smiling.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When he offered a nice dessert on the house, I was freshened up!


  12. Inserting more photos, Peter writes two more reviews about a "Coffee Garden" and then about the Hotel.


  13. Act 2


  14. FLASHBACK


  15. INT. ROOM, SHANGRI-LA HOTEL - 14:30 (Yesterday)


  16. Tired, Peter lies in bed.


  17. PETER (V.O.): Now, I've checked in. Let me have a nap first.


  18. Closing his eyes.


  19. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Days earlier, I worried that my wife might infect me with Covid. And if so, I'd have to postpone my August trip.


  20. Pausing.


  21. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I felt that's not a problem, my next worry was how to pay other than using cash or credit cards in mainland China.


  22. Pausing.


  23. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Since re-opening of mainland China this year, I've been to mainland China three times - all were well-organized by others.


  24. Pausing.


  25. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've just learned to use the right App for making health declarations for entry and exit of mainland China.


  26. Pausing.


  27. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): To sustain my monthly travelling hobby, I considered going to Tokyo, but I couldn't find a slot not clashing with my HKUST engagements.


  28. Pausing.


  29. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): For the sake of my August travel, I chose Shenzhen where I could walk to the Shangri-la hotel from Lohu.


  30. Peter dozes off.


  31. INT. XIANG GONG RESTARANT - 19:00


  32. Elegant ambiance. We see Peter doing his orders.


  33. PETER (V.O.): Having swum in the Hotel's outdoor pool, I feel hungry.


  34. Later, eye-appeal seafood dishes are put on Peter's table.

  35. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I can freshen up with a nice meal and pay by credit card.


  36. INT. ROOM, SHANGRI-LA HOTEL - 21:45


  37. Peter is watching a movie on TV. We see on screen cards from "1-500" appearing at intervals.


  38. PETER (V.O.): In this movie "500 Days of Summer", it's refreshing way to tell the forward or backward sequences.


  39. Watching.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): "Summer" embodies the protagonist's hopes and it's also the name of the antagonist. In short, perception isn't fact.


  41. After seeing a "500" card on screen, we see"1" and then a new face introducing herself as "Autumn".


  42. INT. POOL FACILITIES - 11:15 (Today)

  43. Bathroom. We hear the sound of running water echoes.


  44. PETER (V.O.): I swim regularly and wash myself a lot.


  45. Jacuzzi. Watching the strong stream of water from jets, Peter is reflecting.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Do I need a mental spring to declutter my mind?


  47. Changing room. Sitting before a mirror, Peter stares at his image and then takes a photo of it.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Is it wrong for me to think that I still look right?


  49. Peter uses the photo as the new profile picture of an App.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's a reflection of me - I look ahead by looking back.


  51. RETURN TO PRESENT


  52. Act 3


  53. INT. STUDIO - 23:00


  54. Having input the prompt: "A freshened up white-haired man inside a changing room" in an AI art generator, Peter sees a cubist image appearing.


  55. PETER (V.O.): He seems to have a renewed sense of joy. Yes, I embrace technology, keep myself fit, travel to explore...

  56. Thinking.


  57. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I believe I've discovered the power of freshening up. It's a game-changer, creating opportunities to be better.


  58. Reflecting.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): As a white-haired man, I still have to freshen up my life more so as to appreciate the beauty of it!


  60. FADE OUT


  61. THE END
















































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