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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

Kaji: Hold In

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. EXT. ROADS/CAR PARK - NIGHT


  4. Sitting on the lap of the PACK LEADER of a moving car, KAJI sniffs the scent outside.


  5. KAJI (V.O.): Where are we going?


  6. Observing.


  7. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): The roads and the scent are new to me.


  8. The car drives past a curvy road.


  9. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): I feel insecure.


  10. The car goes through a long tunnel.


  11. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): It smells like farts.


  12. The car arrives in a car park.


  13. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was here before. Strange.


  14. Act 2


  15. EXT. PET GARDEN - LATER


  16. Leading the Pack Leader & the GANG, Kaji arrives at the entrance.


  17. KAJI (V.O.): Although I haven't come here for a while, I remember the scent.


  18. A couple of STRANGERS and their MASTERS begin to engage Kaji.


  19. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): Who are they? I need to protect myself.


  20. Kaji stares down at them.


  21. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): If needed, I'd bare my teeth, make a warning growl and even bark.


  22. One by one, Kaji has deterred their advances.


  23. PACK LEADER: Why don't you go and poop?


  24. FLASHBACK


  25. EXT. PAVEMENT - THE NIGHT BEFORE


  26. Leading the Pack Leader and Peter, Kaji crosses a junction and turns left.


  27. PETER: She's still wanting to go to her lost paradise.


  28. KAJI (V.O.): I've got Peter's cue.


  29. Kaji stops abruptly.


  30. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): Last time when I turned left, I couldn't find the entrance.


  31. Kaji then turns right.


  32. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): Going in this direction, I can go to the sea front.


  33. Kaji begins to run.


  34. EXT. PROMENADE - LATER


  35. As the party arrive, we see PEOPLE here and there.


  36. KAJI (V.O.): It's too noisy here, not my area of choice.


  37. Kaji leads the Pack Leader to an area much farther away, leaving Peter far behind.


  38. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): We haven't been out for quite a while. I've no inclination to hold in my business.


  39. Kaji soon finds her area of choice to get light.


  40. RETURN TO PRESENT


  41. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): Here, the area is very different.


  42. Pausing.


  43. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): It's very small and I'm very exposed.


  44. INT/EXT. RESTAURANT - LATER


  45. Resting in a chair, Kaji looks tired and unrelieved. Peter comes to capture a moment.


  46. KAJI (V.O.): For two nights in a row, we've been out and I've run long distances.


  47. Pausing.


  48. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): Last night was superb, but not tonight.


  49. Pausing.


  50. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): And I've to hold in my business, most reluctantly.


  51. Act 3


  52. IEXT. CARPARK/ROADS - LATER


  53. Sitting on the lap of the Pack Leader of a moving car, Kaji sniffs the scent.


  54. KAJI (V.O.): Just then, the Pack Leader has taken me to that pet garden again. But I still refuse to poop.


  55. Pausing.


  56. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): I know they must find it strange that I won't poop tonight.


  57. Pausing.


  58. KAJI (V.O.) (Cont'd): I hold in my business not because I want to prolong time outdoors. I'm determined that I'd only poop in the promenade.


  59. FADE OUT


  60. THE END






















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