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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

Our Traditional Practice

  1. FADE IN.


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. SITTING ROOM - 12:00


  4. PETER is checking WhatsApp messages.


  5. PETER (V.O): Today is Ching Ming. Due to pandemic restrictions, we cancelled our family's traditional practice to sweep tombs at Nipple Mountain.


  6. Pausing.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I actually felt very bad about it.


  8. Pausing.


  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Last Saturday, my son suggested that we could still go to the Columbarium in Tsuen Wan to pay tribute to my Dad.

  10. Pausing.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I was so pleased that he'd raise that.


  12. Recalling.


  13. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Let me go and buy some dim-sums for lunch before sustaining our traditional practice.


  14. Act 2


  15. EXT. ESTATE STREET - 14:45


  16. Exiting from a block with his son, Peter is attracted by the bright-pink Bougainvillea leaves overhanging at a roof edge.


  17. PETER (V.O.): Whenever I see these thorny ornamental vines, I'd remember my late maternal Grandma.


  18. FLASHBACK


  19. EXT. MUI YUEN, TIN SUM SAN TSUEN - DAY (1964)


  20. PETER (10) is observing his GRANDMA (64) who is appreciating the bright-pink Bougainvillea leaves scrambling along fence lines.


  21. PETER (V.O.): Grandma planted some a few months ago. Now, I see lots of bright-pink leaves.


  22. Peter sees his Grandma selecting a section of the stem with a healthy crown of leaves before cutting it.


  23. PETER: Grandma, why do you do that?


  24. GRANDMA: To propagate more.


  25. PETER: Let me help you.


  26. GRANDMA: Be careful with their thorns.


  27. END FLASHBACK


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Out of the blue, my Grandpa died two years earlier at the age of 62.


  29. Pausing.


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): All along, he only cared about his third wife.


  31. Pausing.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Still, his 2nd wife, my maternal Grandma, was very upset.


  33. Pausing.


  34. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): So I was happy to see her growing more Bougainvillea.


  35. Pausing.


  36. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When my 3rd Grandma died in 1969, I didn't go to her funeral. I chose to work part-time to earn a few dollars more.


  37. Pausing.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In 1972, my maternal Grandma was very ill. We couldn't bear hearing her groaning.


  39. Pausing.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Inscribed on her tombstone was the family consensus: The Greatest and Kindest Mother/Grandma.


  41. Peter captures a few photos.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Today is clear (Ching) and bright (Ming) too.


  43. EXT. CEMETERY, TSUEN WAN - 15:45


  44. Under a covered open-air columbarium, Peter is cleaning his Dad's niche passionately.


  45. PETER (V.O.): Having retired at the age of 60 in 1992, my Dad helped me raise my son, even before I became a widower.


  46. Pausing.


  47. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When he was terminally ill in 2011, I had a careless driving incident.


  48. Recalling.


  49. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Of his five children, I felt my Dad loved me the most.


  50. Pausing.


  51. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Months after I became Director of Intellectual Property, my Dad died.


  52. Sighing.


  53. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): But it's only after his death that I've been saying "I love you Dad".


  54. Act 3


  55. INT. SITTING ROOM - 23:00


  56. Peter is checking messages on screen.


  57. PETER (V.O.): Oh, my younger brother (and his son) have swept the tombs of our Grandpa and his 2nd and 3rd wives. Well done!


  58. Pausing.


  59. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): With my son's company, I've gone to the columbarium to clean the niche of our beloved Dad.


  60. Reflecting.


  61. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Our traditional practice is built on the love that our ancestors have left us.


  62. FADE OUT


  63. THE END

























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