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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

Three Score & Ten

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. STUDIO - 11:30


  4. Reading answer requests on Quora, PETER looks curious.


  5. PETER (V.O.): What does the expression "three score and ten" mean?


  6. Peter surfs the web with his smart phone.


  7. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): "Three score" used to mean 60, just like "a dozen" for 12.


  8. Pausing.

  9. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): "Three score and ten" is 70 years - the nominal life span when the expression was popular.


  10. Peter types his answer on screen.


  11. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've lived three score and eight already.


  12. Getting his swimming gear bag, Peter exits.


  13. Act 2


  14. EXT. GOLDEN BEACH - 13:00


  15. Towing a cyber-green buoy, Peter is swimming along the outer limit of the swimming area.


  16. PETER (V.O.) : Without the buoy, I might hesitate to swim so far out.


  17. Peter sees a lifeguard kayaking nearby.


  18. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): He's to save me if I get into any trouble.


  19. Recalling.


  20. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): In the 1960s, I just played in shallow water and dug clams in nearby beaches.

  21. Swimming.


  22. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I'm swimming against the waves. The corner at the other end is still not in sight.


  23. Recalling.


  24. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Yesterday, while I was watching YouTube, I happened to see a tribute to Seekers' Judith Durham. I didn't know she died on Aug 5 at the age of 79.


  25. Pausing.


  26. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I wasn't a fan of Olivier Newton-John. But I was attracted by the distinctive voice of Judith Durham.


  27. Recalling.


  28. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I was in my first score, I loved the Seekers' "Georgy Girl" the most.


  29. Peter reaches the other corner.


  30. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): When I was in my second score, I loved the Seekers' "I Will Never Find Another You".


  31. Peter begins to swim free style.


  32. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): And I only began composing songs towards the end of my third score.


  33. Peter returns to the beach.


  34. INT. PETER'S NT HOME - 16:00


  35. Terrace. Peter removes the broken concrete along the drainage edge.

  36. PETER (V.O.): They're over 20 years old.


  37. Peter puts some white concrete on the areas.


  38. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've just bought some water-proof concrete from a mall store.


  39. Using a wet cloth to drop water onto the concrete, Peter uses a trowel to mix them into plaster.


  40. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): This is something I can do before the next rainstorm.


  41. Later. G/F. Peter is dumping papers into a large plastic bag.


  42. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I've formally retired for over eight years, and I still have lots of possessions.


  43. Pausing.


  44. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): All along, I wasn't sure about decluttering, and if so, my pace.


  45. Pausing.


  46. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): For every item I declutter, I might throw away the trigger of a forgotten story.


  47. Pausing.


  48. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Only the thought of leaving fewer troubles to my family motivates me to stop hoarding.


  49. Pausing.


  50. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Noting the meaning of three score and ten now, I've about 21 months to get the job done.


  51. Act 3


  52. INT. STUDIO - 20:00


  53. On YouTube, Peter is watching black-and-white video clips.

  54. PETER (V.O.): These oldies made available were recorded during the first score of my life.


  55. On screen, Cliff Richard is singing his 1958 rock-and-roll song "Move It".


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): I love to watch them as they make me feel young.


  57. On screen, the Beach Boys are singing their 1964 car song "Little Honda".


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Yes, I still have some energy and force.


  59. On screen, the Animals are singing their 1964 blues-rock song "The House of the Rising Sun".


  60. THE END


  61. FADE OUT



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