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Writer's picturePeter K F Cheung SBS

When We're Young

Updated: Dec 28, 2022

  1. FADE IN


  2. Act 1


  3. INT. DINING ROOM - 12:05


  4. Next to his WIFE, PETER is eating peanuts. Then, he looks shocked to read a WhatsApp message on phone screen.


  5. PETER: Oh, Ah Shui has died in the small hours of Dec 27, 2022.


  6. WIFE: Your friend in Macao?


  7. PETER: Yes.


  8. PETER (V.O.): I last met Ah Shui in Macao in 2015. It turned out to be really the last one.


  9. Pausing.


  10. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Between us, I feel we're very good friends.


  11. Pausing.


  12. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): While he wasn't fit to travel to Hong Kong, I didn't find it comfortable to visit him in Macao either.


  13. Act 2


  14. FLASHBACK


  15. INT. LIFT, MACAO - DAY (MARCH 29, 2015)


  16. Peter (60) and his SON, AH SHUI (61) and his WOMAN are inside.


  17. WOMAN: We meant to have lunch together... But Kam-sin has an acute problem and has to go to the hospital now.


  18. PETER: Lunch is a small thing. Health comes first.


  19. WOMAN: One of our assistants will drive you two to the ferry pier. We haven't bought the ferry tickets...


  20. PETER: Don't worry!


  21. Lift lobby. They part.


  22. AH SHUI: Bye bye, Ah Fai.


  23. PETER: Bye bye, Ah Shui. Take care!


  24. EXT. ROADS, MACAO - LATER


  25. Peter & son are sitting in the middle row of a 7-seater. Just before arriving at the ferry pier, the ASSISTANT/DRIVER leaves a $1000 note behind the center console box.


  26. FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  27. INT. HOSPITAL, MACAO - DAY (JAN 5, 2014)


  28. Private ward. Peter and a FRIEND see Ah Shui lying in bed and a woman by his side crying.


  29. FRIEND: Ah Shui's heart has stopped beating for awhile earlier.


  30. INT. RESTAURANT, MACAO, DAY (LATER)

  31. Peter, the friend and a MAN are talking during a meal.


  32. PETER (V.O.): The man complains a lot about Ah Shui's delegation of powers of his businesses - money matters.


  33. END FLASHBACK UPON FLASHBACK


  34. PETER (V.O.): Ah Shui is quite rich. But we come here to help him.


  35. Picking up the note quickly, Peter passes it back to the Assistant/Driver.


  36. PETER: We'll manage.


  37. RETURN TO PRESENT


  38. Finding a black and white photo from the Photos App, Peter edits it, adds a "I'll Remember You" subtitle and sends it to a chat group.


  39. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): We've known each other since our matriculation days in 1971.


  40. MONTAGE OF PETER'S ENGAGEMENT WITH "AH SHUI"


  41. A. NT Heung Yee Kuk School. 1972. Peter and other STUDENTS are having a photo session.


  42. B. Castle Peak Hotel. 1973. Peter teaches Ah Shui how to wait tables.


  43. C. Ning Yeung Terrace, 1977-1978. Peter's bed space is next to Ah Shui's.


  44. D. Building sites. Macao, 1989. Ah Shui takes Peter to inspect his development projects.


  45. END MONTAGE


  46. FLASHBACK


  47. INT. AH SHUI'S HOME, MACAO - NIGHT (MARCH 28, 2015)


  48. Peter and Ah Shui are chatting.


  49. PETER: I worked as a civil servant for 40 years.


  50. AH SHUI: I worked as a family's servant for a long time too.


  51. PETER (V.O.): If we weren't very good friends, he wouldn't confess this to me.


  52. RETURN TO PRESENT


  53. Act 3


  54. INT. DINING ROOM - CONTINUOUS


  55. Finding another black and white photo from the Photos App on his phone, Peter edits it.


  56. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): The photo reminds me of how we looked like 50 years ago. We're very close and didn't know how life would work out for us.


  57. Sighing.


  58. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd):I won't cry that Ah Shui has gone. With heart attacks and strokes, he has cheated death for nearly 20 years.


  59. Thinking.


  60. PETER (V.O.) (Cont'd): Ah Shui has become another memory of mine. I measure my life in memory of my loved ones. My life is quite rich too.


  61. THE END


  62. FADE OUT






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